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Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-12-20 10:13 PM

I've forgotten
How much it hurts
To hear your name
And see your smile.
For the longest time
I thought that was
Exactly what I wanted.
But was it?

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2001-12-21 02:01 AM

Short sweet and too the point I liked this one.But I don't think you will ever get the answer to that question.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-12-21 11:28 AM

You are the only one who can answer your question in the end
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-12-24 07:12 PM

this pome was simple yet VERY powerful for me...esp the,

"I've forgotten
How much it hurts
To hear your name
And see your smile." even though its not always how it ends and i liked how youe ended it with questioning yoruself.

Hey...#25437
What!
You in there?
Yea, im in here.
ok

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

4 posted 2001-12-24 08:12 PM

i can reate perfectly to this poem... great work dear!

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-12-25 12:01 PM

shrot and sweet....all i wanna know was....was it??

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-12-26 10:08 AM

So much can be said in such a short poem. Very nice work! And a tough situation. *hugs* I hope everything workds out.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-12-28 12:02 PM

We always think we know what's best for ourselves....how rare is it to find that's true?
Short pieces rock and yours is no exception. I enjoyed it.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

8 posted 2001-12-28 02:49 AM

i liked this poem a lot! great work!
robin

repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created!

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

9 posted 2001-12-28 04:05 AM

WHOA this one hit me in face...very good question posed in this one. Thanks for sharing
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

prov1717
Member

since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

10 posted 2001-12-30 11:31 PM

short poems say the most....beautiful work!

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

11 posted 2001-12-31 01:23 AM

I love this poem . . . You said it perfectly in just a few words. Great job!

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