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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
hmmm i just wrote this and its not all that profound but hey...it works huh  i've realized life changes so unexpectedly and as much as i want to go back i can't my life is what i've made it my choices have brought me here i feel the sting of all my screwups with every single tear i can't believe i'm here now this isn't what i wanted to be time went to fast, i couldn't keep up, i couldnt' see i figured i had forever to live and forever to choose i thought life would wait for me i wasn't aware of all i'd lose |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wow... I know exactly what you mean by choices and how time really goes by fast.But you just have to keep strong and try not to let the past run your life no matter how hard it is to forget about it.Awsome poem I love it and keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I understand where your coming from here...unfortunately you really cant go back even though we all wish at times to takle things back and like you said feel the sting of every mistake in every tear..wonderful poem..very very true! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
::BuMP:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
It may not be as profound as you wanted it, but it was also much more it was truth. You are so right and I know exactly where you are coming from. This is a great poem, with a message that should be looked at and taken to heart by everyone! ~jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was very good. we wish and we dream to fix our pasts, but we cant go back in time, so maybe we should just move forward? Regina |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
The past is there for a reason It's for us to learn from you can never move forward without looking back at the past take things this way, then get up and do something about it good luck and God bless là où est mon amour? |
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