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corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-12-18 10:20 PM

I'v been told to move on,
from love,from life.
How can I do this,
they all think it is easy.

I,v been told that life goes on,
not when it means so much.
They say another chance will come,
maybe, maybe not and if it doesn't.

Knowin this feeling hurts,
inside, out.
We know we try not to show it,
but it always comes out.

The time will come,
when they find out how it feels.
They wont be saying move on,
they will be crying too.

I'v been told to move on.

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-12-18 11:28 PM

hey let me no what u thin of my poem im not realy good at writing i just want the truth also my sn is cbaker515 so talk...

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-12-19 01:21 AM

Nice poem I really like it keep up the great work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2001-12-20 06:15 PM

Nice poem.

It flowed pretty well, and I could relate. it's hard to move on. Sometimes, what everyone says doesn't mean anything: it's all worthless. All that matters is that you personally can move on in your own time. I hope you've been able to. The poem was short, but it seemed to fit this piece. Again, nicely done.

Sincerely,
Titus

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-12-21 08:11 AM

Its hard to tell your mind to move on from love when your heart cant let go...so true...so tough...::hugs:: if you dont wanna move on and your not ready to then dont...everything has its place and time..

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-12-21 11:27 AM

Nothing in life is easy, but we still need to do what we need to do
that's what makes us stronger in life
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
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