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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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_________ok you guys i have something to tell you i use to go by a different name on here.. Andrea4Writes .. so im going to re posting some of them here ok?? _____________________________ The feeling is unbearable with out you near so ill just close your eyes and pretend that you are here you're so close yet so far away i need you know what can i say? THe pleasures of love bring on the lonliness bouts though the tortures stay my heart remains without a doubt as time ticks away the shorter it seems that ill hold you here sadness overcomes me ill forever save this love so true no matter the future my heart goes with you if another shall be found ill stay my distance away but my heart and soul filled with you will stay forever my love forever so true my heart filled promises i will be waiting for you *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awww this is sweet. "if another shall be found ill stay my distance away but my heart and soul filled with you will stay" but if he did leave you- you should find love and be happy A....nice write  |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
cute, I liked it. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Yoda Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19 |
Wow... deja vu... and you described it PERFECTLY. Since this is an old poem (right?) I'm guessing you're not quite in this situation anymore. But if you are.. *hugs*  You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
once again this was really good Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed the read...you write VERY nicely...pure sweetness! Hey...#25437 |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
Aww very nice and sweet poem...yay!   ~parallel universe~ |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Awesome poem. It sux that you had to go though sumthin like this to write such a beautiful poem but I'm hoping you can look back at the situation and find the good things about it It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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baby0508 Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 58Moodus, Connecticut |
that was a really sad poem. we all have to take situations like this to look back upon right? well i hope that things get better!! |
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sXeHURLEYgurl New Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 2Grove City Ohio |
awesome awesome awesome, I hate sucky times, and I bet everyone else does too. So many of these poems remind me that everyone goes through the same crap I do!!!!!!! Well enough on my pity trip, great poem!!! ~*Jocelyn*~ |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i really liked this! i could relate well......nice write  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very well written piece I really like it keep up the good work. Lauren |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Lovely, Andrea I do hope that things are better for you know then they were a month ago. Keep writing these great pieces. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm sorry this happened to you... All of us at PIP are here to support you, so don't hesitate to turn to any of us for help. This is a beautiful piece... very heartfelt. *hugs* God bless... I hope things turn out well for you. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just don't lose hope thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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