Teen Poetry #5 |
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sad brown eyes Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19Connecticut U.S |
He told me i needed a new man, someone who will care. Asked where i could find one and he says, he's standing right here. Told him i got hurt and i dont want the same thing happening again. He promised and told me things that now i dont understand. He left me cold and bitter just like a winter. Left me for someone who has hurt him again and again. Told me she deserved a second chance while i feel dead. Is it me? Something i said? Every time the same thing happens again and again. renee [This message has been edited by sad brown eyes (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*huggies* You know, blaming yourself isn't the way to go. Obviously this guy doesn't understand you as a person because if he did, he wouldn't have left. Try not to worry too much about it, as tough as that may be. The sun will continue to rise and fall and each day brings us new surprises. Remember this and things will look up. Thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, Seachange |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
You really shouldn't blame yourself she is right but anyway very well written poem I liked it. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I just hate it when this happens The question is, will you give him the 2nd chance Specially when this other person breaks his heart again I hope you learn from the past It's the past that makes us take a step into the future remember that thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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