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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2001-12-17 01:11 AM

read and tell me what you honestly think, thanks
-bergundy-

dark thoughts
guilty pleasure
i know i shouldn't think these words
but they make me feel better
whispered words
deceitful minds
i find comfort
in your lies
as my mind slowly fades away
seeking refuge from my pain
i become polluted
by your acid rain

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

[This message has been edited by fearing-laughter (edited 12-17-2001).]

dastard
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 55
in tearing silence

1 posted 2001-12-17 01:46 AM

I liked it!

{place random, but good, sig HERE}

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2001-12-20 12:53 PM

thanks dastard! =)
-bergundy-

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2001-12-20 06:22 PM

Bergundy

Interesting! Short, but strong! Very strong, and vivid. Again, very cool

Sincerely,
Titus

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

4 posted 2001-12-20 10:05 PM

Very VERY good. I'm not quite sure why I fell that way, but I do...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-12-21 01:54 PM

Maybe you shouldnt think those words but if they cant help but make you feel better than what r u gonna do ya kno?? WoNdErFuL pOeM...

I can definately relate

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-12-31 10:06 AM

You did well

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2002-01-03 11:31 AM

Wow!!

First of all, welcome back! I haven't seen your posts in a while either. It's great to have you back, so be sure to show yourself more!

This is an awesome poem. I loved the last line - that especially hit me hard. The intensity of the poem makes is very powerful, dspite the length. You did very well here. I'm impressed! I enjoyed this, as always.
Well done

--Marie

"It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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