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SmileyClar Junior Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 16nowhere anymore |
Oddities I have finally Admitted to The fact that it’s you Who makes me smile I worship all the things That no one else notices All those oddities you have that make you, yourself The way you move your hands when you talk to me The childlike look on your face when you are proud The mole by your ear and your two uneven teeth How your eyes sparkle when you’re excited The scar that you got on your forehead How you hum softly when you run Even how you chew your food I guess it means I love you But the real oddity is We happen to be Just Friends Forever ¨ Just one of those rare, warm-fuzzies poems. I love how he says warm-fuzzies too... ~Smiley - Some of the time |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww this is so sweet but in a way, so very sad. Hey, at least you have something all those over peeps wanting a piece of this person. You're the friend, you can't get any closer than that!  Thanks for the read. I enjoyed it quite a bit. ~AF~ "I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, Seachange |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwww so cute!! I love the format cutesy heart!!  Love the topic too...*sigh* Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love the way you made the poem into a heart Have you even talked to this person about how you truly feel? Maybe you need to do so là où est mon amour? |
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