Teen Poetry #5 |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world ![]() |
Never I may never see the real you But I know who you are You're the one who wants to start off new who thinks you can't make it very far You're the only one who thinks you're worthless Who always puts you down We'd rather keep you hurtless For you to always stay around Though life may sometimes be too much We're here for you forever So please don't worry such Would we ever leave you? NEVER!!! -------------------------------------- This was written 2 years ago in my 9th grade year when me and Kristin were arguing so much....I wrote it for her to show how much me and her other friends care about her. -->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is incredibly sweet!! ![]() |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is an excellent poem, very well written and I'm sure your friend was as pleased with it as I am! Keep writing! ![]() ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Though life may sometimes be too much We're here for you forever So please don't worry such Would we ever leave you? NEVER!!!" This is so sweet! You're a very good friend. I hope Kris realizes what a friendship she has here... Nicely done! --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
First I'm jealous of you and Zu, Now you and Kristin...hehehe You have the best relationships with people! Thats great! It's a very sweet poem- I'm sure Kristin loved it. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aww, I really liked that one! Actually, I imagine that's how my friends think of me... Hm. I REALLY think that's how Ashleigh thinks of me... I guess I put myself down a lot... Anyway, I really liked this one. Thanks for postin! ![]() - Cody - |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a really great read and I think that it's very very sweet and I am not surprised that it kept you and Kris together as friends, Well done. Andrew [This message has been edited by Marshalzu (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was nice..very sweet ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I hope that your friend realizes how much she means to you now. This was a wonderful poem! *Amanda* |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
I liked this a lot. great job. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on this one Stace! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
I told you this when you gave it to me, and I'll tell you again, I love this poem, and I'm glad that that "problem" is over with, and we're better friends than ever! ![]() I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is a very well written poem... very sincere |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Kris is lucky to have a friend like you. That was a really sweet thing to do. You have a good heart. Thanks for the read Stace. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is really very sweet of you stace..im sure kris would have liked it a lot....thanks for sharing this it really shows the sweet and sensitive side of you that we all love.. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
good work, nice poem for your friend. Regina |
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