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baby0508 Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 58Moodus, Connecticut |
I'm re-posting this because there are some people that never got the chance to read it and I know that some of you will enjoy it. Mind Games Mess with my head a little more because the pain you'll never see Continue to rip my heart in shreds and cause me misery. Watch every tear fall off my face and act like your confused. Pretend that you can't see How my kindness you've abused. Play with my emotions like their nothing Mess with them constantly Pretend that they don't exhist Continue hurting me. Do you like it when I cry When there's no smile upon my face? Does it please you just to know That a tear now takes its place? Do you love to cause me pain? And play with my fraigle heart? How about you break it all you'd like, Just rip it all apart. You're gonna wish you never did this Never played this little game Cause now it's turned upon you, And you're the one to blame. Now I've turned your game around, So this is what you do. And now your heartless mind games, Are only hurting YOU!! |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow. I liked it. The anger and hurt come through quite clearly. Good write... Also, the short lines, and quick fire rythym of them make it more powerful. Again, nice work.  Titus |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just let his past and current actions hurt himself never turn around and do it to him yourself that's just going down to his level that's the last thing you wanna do thanks for the read là où est mon amour? |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
I liked this alot, i hope to see lots more like this, i enjoyed it. Thanks for posting ....Handle with care... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great poem!! It had a ton of feeling and emotion in it!!! Thanks for sharing!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Ouch...but good idea...people always get what they give, and they usually deserve it. Well written poem, i really liked the way you wrote it and the words you chose to use... " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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