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sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

0 posted 2001-11-14 02:47 PM

Pushing people away
Scared of their strong feelings
That they hold for me
Strong feelings.....
Always seem to lead to pain
No matter how hard I try to disapear
Pain always finds me
Wanting to find happiness
Only scared it will bring more pain
Not expecting much from the world
Then there is less chance for disapointment
Sometimes not sure if i expected more
That those small momeents of happiness
Would be there anymore
And stuck in a darkness that is more lonely & sad
I can't handle more pain then i am faceing now
It is hard to let anyone in the door
Putting your trust in people....
Doesn't seem safe
They can drop you in a moment
Then your all alone again

this is a poem i wrote yesterday sort of like the other one i wrote but right when i was feeling sad idk i thought you guyz might like it =D

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

1 posted 2001-11-14 07:22 PM

Nice write

I liked the poem, good portrayal of emotions... made me think about showing how much i love the one.. that i well, love

cuz ive been wondering if i should since i dont want to scare her away or anything.

-Dreys

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-11-14 07:28 PM

This is the best poem by far I have ever read on Pip I love it.I can relate exactly to what you are saying which you can see by reading any of my poems.You have a very special talent and keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.
Lauren

Some_one
New Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1
Australia

3 posted 2001-11-14 07:28 PM

Hey
I lvoe your poem and i guess its a feeling i can relate to well. Its hard to trust other people sometimes and when you do and they abuse that trust its even harder. Its a really nice poem, keep up ya writing

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-11-15 06:33 PM

It can defintely be dangerous to let ppl in, and so it makes it seem so much more practical to just "push them away". I admit that I am guilty of this too, and I understand what you are expressing in this poem. Although pushing everyone away keeps you safe from pain, it always leaves you very alone in the end.

So it's really important that you learn how to trust ppl and let them into your life. I'm trying to learn the same thing, and I know it's tough, but I think we are both capable of it!! Good luck!!

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~
AIM sn: nikkigrl2004

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-12-21 10:34 PM

"Not expecting much from the world
Then there is less chance for disapointment"

OOooooo...I love free-verse dark poems...Tis my fav! LOL Pretty cool write here...Thumbs up to you.

"I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

6 posted 2001-12-23 03:47 AM

I liked this...ya used free verse very well and showed the emotions instead of saying them...get what i mean? if not...aw well...LoL keep writin

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

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