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gokorn1
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 5

0 posted 2001-12-11 02:28 PM

Why is it always you want something you can never have?
I am confused, fighting myself
Can’t you see it in me?
I try pull you closer, You push me away
Is it love not yet known
What have I done?
Why is it that your taken?
You’re the only thing I want in this world
Is it fear?
Do you see outside your fears?
It seems you tell lies and despise
Every second you’re around me
I'd do anything to see through your eyes
I’d do anything just to see through your lies
I wonder if this feeling will ever go away
Each day is more frightening with the anticipation of your call
But IM always let down
Should I take all the stupid bull and run away?
You never gave me a chance
What’s wrong with me?
I could have been your everything
I could have been the one
Is it something I said or did?
Sometimes I ask myself
Why try?
Then I think of you and
I know why I try

I can remember when we first met
we could of really had good some times
when the success started to kick in
life turned into a mess.
Many nights, painful thoughts occurred
Is this a game?
You took no pride in me
If you asked if I needed you…
If you asked if I loved you
The answer is FOREVER
I could have been your everything
What do I do now?
All I see, a hate deep inside
startles me,
You’re the only on who can save me
My throat I take grasp
Eyes roll back
Love racing trough my veins
I hate you, Can you feel my pain?
It’s not worth it
I hate you
I reallyhate you
OH my god I need you
Ahhhh I love you.
How can I cry over someone I never loved?
Never loved...

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-12-12 01:07 AM

Oh this is great! I can feel your pain. It is so clearly presented throughout the entire piece.
The repetition in some parts of the poem was a nice touch. I hate to think that you love a girl so much that you can hate her. Although, we all do go through these things. *sigh* Love is such a cruel thing.

Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much. Keep smiling and keep your head up.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-12-12 08:06 AM

THIS IS GREAT!! I think that this is full of emotion and you expressed yourself really really well

..nicely done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-12-13 09:55 PM

This seems quite raw and honest. You displayed your emotions well.

Thanks for sharing.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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