Teen Poetry #5 |
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA ![]() |
Casting smiles aside, Thinking life is a bluff, She just laughs when it hurts, When it pains her to love. She’s as light as the breeze, Lifting souls when she flirts And it pains her to love And she laughs when it hurts. Check out my poetry here: |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm gonna have to keep this one ![]() It's perfect ![]() |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Just beautiful, Andrey. It's elegant in it's simplicity. I'm going to keep this one too. I know a person this would fit perfectly. Well done. Another great piece. ~AF~ "Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier |
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since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite deep...i like your expression and its nice to see them in the forums again...enjoyed fully, wonderful piece. Hey...#25437 |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Lizzy put it the right way..."elegance in simplicity" You've always been amazing I've seen a decline in your sharing though I hope you change your mind and do share more Thanks for the wonderful and beautiful read là où est mon amour? |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Havent seen you around here in a while!!! Its great to see you again!! Short and sweet poem...wondderful job and i hope to continue to see more of your poems! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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