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baby0508
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since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-12-10 01:22 PM

My Christmas Wish

It's getting close to Christmas,
Bright smiles on every face.
Because it's getting close to Christmas,
but I feel so out of place.

I'm full of Christmas spirit
but all I want is to be with you.
Thats all I want this Christmas
and I'm sad that won't come true.

I just want to feel loved once again
and be inside your heart.
It's my only wish this year,
To no longer be apart.

Just one last chance I ask for
On this Christmas night
To hold you in my arms again
and soon I hope I might.

No gift can make me happy
because I want to be with you.
So do me this one favor,
Please let my Christmas wish come true.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2001-12-10 04:22 PM

Christmas wishes are just the best, eh? The hope of something you want so much coming true.. *sigh* The joy of Christmas! Heh, nice work. I enjoyed this poem. It's well written. I look forward to reading more.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-12-10 05:43 PM

I think this poem was very well written..nicely done...::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-12-11 12:47 PM

Wouldn't it be great if all our Christmas wishes came true? That'd make for a really great day.

I hope that you get what you desire. The piece itself was good. It flowed nicely.

Take care and thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-12-21 12:33 PM

Have you shown this person this poem?
I suggest you do so
I hope you do get your wish for Christmas
have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-12-21 01:31 PM

OooOOoo i forgot to mention that i hope that your christmas wish comes true

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

baby0508
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since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

6 posted 2001-12-21 01:45 PM

yeah..i did show it to the person i wrote it for and he doesnt care. he said that himself " i need to get over the fact that he is gone and i don't care" just like that. i wish that it would come true at least i did but i know i deserve better so what is my prob?

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