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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
There was a time when I hated you I thought you were out there to hurt me now I see that friends is what we were meant to be I’m glad though cause I totally adore you now Now that the problem went away I’m hoping that things wont end anytime soon If they did I don’t know what I would do. I can’t wait to see what this friendship brings It is all in my dreams My dreams of what comes and my dreams of what goes Hopefully soon we’ll know!! Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's nice to see you and this person are getting along not only that, you also hope for a bright future for your friendship that's a good thing to do i hope things do go well thanks for the great read là où est mon amour? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ahh I hope this friendship brings you many hours of happiness. Grabbing someone like this is such a great feeling so I'm happy for you.  Thanks for sharing. Remember to reply as well as post, please. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, cassi i liked this! lol great job!  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It's so wonderful when you find a friend like that. I'm glad that you've shared your experience with your lovely, thoughtful words, keep up the writing and I hope to see you around here a lot more!  *Krista Knutson* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem about friendship and what sometimes it brings. also ending it with the anticipation of the future to come. Hey...#25437 |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
How true the old saying is "dont judge a book by its cover"...im glad you found a companion in this person rather than en enemy You can never have too many friends!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
well, I'm glad that you figured out that friends was the best way to be before it was too late. I like this poem. Nicely done. Enjoyed, as always --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
friendship is an amazing thing! nice work! |
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