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Crash&Burn
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since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

0 posted 2001-12-06 09:11 PM

well yes another post of mine, haven't posted in a while sorry bout that

. Anyways so yeah I believe I'm back with some spanking new stuff so I hope you like this zappy thingy your about to read, in the spirit of christmas, enjoy...

Christmas Love:

With a spot of snow
and crystal spikes
the christmas decorations
hang from my house.
With lights all over
like stars on the ground,
with reindeers and sleighs
all red and white.
There's jolly old men
in suites making me smile
I'm glad in my heart
for christmas eve is around.

I cuddle myself in bed
Lying in wait for presents the next day.
As my eyes close slowly
and just as sleep rolls in
a chimming of bells startles me.
Scared at first curios after,
a "Ho, Ho, Ho" breaks my manner.
I peak out my door,
to my tree still shinning with lights;
finding a single present
left with no card.
Slowly walking to the gift,
quite large I can see.
I open it timidly
finding my love staring at me
with a branch of miseltoe hung delicatly
just directly over us.
So we walk to each other
not blinking or thinkg
then with one kiss sealing the night.
Then when opening my eyes
I see it's morning
and christmas eve has passed.

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

rolly_polly
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since 2001-10-10

Posts 41
puerto rico

1 posted 2001-12-06 09:22 PM

Hey Georgie! I really think this is sooo sweeet awww it's all christmasy.Lol kinda gets you in that nice relaxing vibe that comes along with christmas.

*suddenly becomes perky* anyway nice poem man...
Laterz

~parallel universe~

Honey
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since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-12-06 11:36 PM

Awesome write hun. Ahh christmas it wuld be such a gret holiday if you didnt have to spend so much money!

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-12-07 12:29 PM

Bah humbug. *pouts*

Jorge, this is really sad in a way. It's always the moments you want to keep that slip away faster.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

4 posted 2001-12-07 06:21 PM

AF shhh that was the hidden meaning no one was supposed to know about! I wanted them all to believe it really was a completly happy read

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

Alwye

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In the space between moments

5 posted 2001-12-08 11:46 PM

This is incredibly sweet and somewhat sad. Beautiful christmas poem, keep up the writing, you're good at it!

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

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