Teen Poetry #5 |
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A friend's love |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this one has almost a completely different meaning than the last one i posted, but it is a poem i wrote at the same time i wrote the other one...so w/e...lol Pure, simple, true, that's what love hsould be. But what you've broughht, is nothing but tears and misery. To break her heart, would be such a crime. But I can't see what's gonna happen, I can't see in future time. You said you don't, even want to live like this. What did you think was gonna happen? one of us, you're oging 2 miss. You said you want, both me and her. but she's my friend now, and everything happened in such a blur. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Oh dear! ![]() ![]() |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
as said above, that's a really tough situation and I hope u work it out ok. Anywho, loved the piece! -Joe |
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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
Hey hun I know what this is about. God this has gone a full circle. This poem is great. And remember that no madder what he can tear me up inside but you'll always be my friend and i love you!!!! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah very tough situation to go through I'm sorry.But great poem and I hope everything gets better for you soon. Lauren |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am proud of you dear Neice......you have learned......friendship when true, is worth more than millions. Luv ya hon. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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