Teen Poetry #5 |
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But it did... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
So much pain, I’m slowly sinking under. I sit here in silence, Excepting everything that’s wrong. Without you, my life is incomplete, Without you my sun will never rise again. My own mind is now mocking me, Me and my own self-pity. How could I let this happen? Everything that went wrong, It was all my fault. I never wanted this to happen, But it did….. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yea.. dont you hate it when your own mind mocks you? i get that alot from my jerkoff mind. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know its hard not to think this way...i understand how your feeling..its a very difficult thing to handle when you loose someone..nicely done ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
this was a good poem...i'm not sure who this one was about though..salguod lol..keep on writing cuz it helps get ur feelings and emotions out! lylas ~Jess ~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
just remember this sweetie......it will get ya through life. 1. It takes two to tango. 2. Your beautiful, and he wasn't good enough to start with if he broke your heart. 3. LUV YA On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
It really does hepl getting your emotions and feeling up but anyway I loved this poem keep up the great work. Lauren |
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