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Gettin lost in dreams
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Gettin lost in dreams |
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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
Getting Lost in dreams Dreams are something of the brain thoughts that go through but become and image. I get lost in my thoughts until they become a dream I dream of the future and what it could be. I dream about the past and what I wish it had been. Then I dream on to us and what we have become. Friends from the most unusual way to start. You wanted my man and I fell apart. But you were there to pick me up and fix the pieces. I’ll love you as a friend forever in my heart. Thanx for all you’ve done and all you’ve tried to do. Thanx for just plain out being there when I needed you. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
hey nbh! lol, i liked this 1 alot and u know y, this wuz awesum! i cant wait 2 c more from u! o yea, and welcome 2 the forums! hope u like it here!  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
hey nbh! lol, i liked this 1 alot and u know y, this wuz awesum! i cant wait 2 c more from u! o yea, and welcome 2 the forums! hope u like it here! oops sry 4 the repost ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"Thanx for just plain out being there when I needed you" awwww this is so sweet! it was honest and to the point. i love the way you started it off by talking about dreams and then progressing onto your friendship with your friend. i would have loved to recieve something like this written about me. i think you wrote this well. oh and:   Welcome Sweetlilangel!! i enjoyed this first post of yours very much indeed- friends go through a lot together- good and bad. its nice to know that the bond can last through tough times too! i hope you enjoy your stay here and become an invaluble addition to our family  read and write and reply till you're totally POOPED!  ps- check your email for a spesh as speshul greeting  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome Welcome Welcome Welcome to Passions in Poetry I do hope you enjoy this place If you have any questions regardin PIP, don't hesitate to ask I enjoyed reading you first post I do believe you'll be an asset in here as you can also grow in your poetry at the same time thank you so much for sharing, and hope to see more in the future là où est mon amour? |
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