Teen Poetry #5 |
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The Purple hat |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC ![]() |
the purple hat Beautiful women Age 3: she looks at herself and sees a Queen Age 8: she looks at herself and sees cinderella Age 15: she looks at herself and see ugly sister (mom, i cant go to school looking like this!) Age 20: she looks at herself and sees "too fat/too thin, too short/too tall, too straight/too curly" but decides she's going out anyway Age 30: she looks at herself and sees "too fat/too thin, too short/too tall, too straight/too curly but decides she doesnt have time to fix it so she's going out anyway Age 50: she looks at herself ans sees "Who she really is" and goes wherever she wants to go Age 60: she looks at herself and reminds herself of all the people who cant eve see themselves in the mirror anymore Age 70: she looks at herself & sees wisdom, laughter and ability, goes out and enjoys life Age 80: doesnt bother to look. just puts on a purple hat and goes out to have fun with the world Maybe we should all grab that purple hat earlier~! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
![]() Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmm.. haha.. thats really cute |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was such a cute poem!! Very unique ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really enjoyed this!! There is lots you could do with this poem... I think that you could take out the ":'s" with the timeline format, and actually make it into lines... I really liked the storyline. Very creative! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh wow, Andrea! What an amazing poem. It's so full of positive feelings instead of constant crappiness we read constantly. it's unreal. Really mindblowing stuff. ![]() I love it. Thanks for writing and sharing it. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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