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NathanS
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since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

0 posted 2001-12-04 07:26 PM

It stands tall and Proud,
One time in the year,
Decorated with shimmering lights,
To draw the Children near.

Kids always seem to Know,
that Christmas eve has come,
With people in the snow,
and holoy up for fun.

The rattling on the roof,
You know that santa's here,
so tucked away in bed,
that he'll not see you there.

When you drift into a sleep,
and the morning dost you wake,
those cookies from the night before,
are no longer on the plate.

Santa must have surely come,
with gifts of your delight,
that all the thingsyou asked for,
come within one night.

So when people ask you,
Is santa really true,
You can surely nod your head,
because he came to you.

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Yeh, well, sorry i haven't been responding to peoples poems as much as i use to; so im not expecting any responses to this. This is just kind of a childrens poem, that you might go and read to your kids or something =P
Anyhow, hope you all like it.

-Dreys

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

1 posted 2001-12-04 09:28 PM

it's a beautful piece...I read it to the whole family!

-Joe

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-12-05 12:44 PM

this really made me smile i especially like the way you ended it, nice work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

3 posted 2001-12-05 04:37 PM

I havn't been replying much either, i have a lot goin on in my life so im not posting much either. I truly like this one. I wasn't having the best day but this poem totally lifted my spirits. I think you have a great talent here. Keep posting and I'll look forward to reading more of your werk

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-12-05 07:45 PM

cute dreys!

...i liked the read.

i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun!

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

5 posted 2001-12-05 07:52 PM

Nice i liked it...its better then what ive been putting up

i liked this a lot.

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

6 posted 2001-12-05 08:44 PM

Hehe, thanks for the kind words peeps

It especially please me to hear that you rad it to your family

Thats exactly what i was wanting with this poem... that people might go and read it to friends etc... and get into the Christmas cheer... and remember what Christmas was like when we were all young *grinz*

-Dreys

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