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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
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0 posted 2001-12-04 09:56 AM


Each time you walk away
I can’t go on with my life
But some how
I find a way to go on

Its hard to watch you walk down that hall
Knowing for the rest of the day
I won’t get a kiss,
A hug,
Or be told I love you

But I look forward to the next morning
When I can see you again
And you welcome me with open arms
Like we didn’t even say goodbye yesterday

But time goes by fast
And I know I will have to left you go
In a matter of minutes
And I watch you walk away again

Days become weeks
Weeks become months
I have learned how to let you go
But not without a fight
That hand becomes a finger
That I don’t want to let go
And you are gone
Never looking back
Until I see you’re smiling face again,
I love you Jeffy

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Jeffy and I have been going out for about three months the 13th of this month. He is homeschooled. So each day he leaves me while I stay at school and miss him like crazy


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1 posted 2001-12-04 09:57 AM


This is such a cute poem   Congrats on your 3 month anniversary on the 13th   I liked this a lot...its hard not to miss the ones you love   you expressed that well here  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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viginia
2 posted 2001-12-04 01:05 PM


this is really sweet, its always wonderful when you can find someone you can feel this way about.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

lone_poet707
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3 posted 2001-12-04 09:50 PM


love is a beautiful thing...congrats in advance!;]
  -Joe

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4 posted 2001-12-09 12:15 PM


just really cherish the time you have with him  

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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5 posted 2001-12-10 07:12 AM


Just be thankful that this person was ever in your life.  That, even for a little while, you two shared something so much more special than words.

Well done.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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