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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-12-02 06:27 PM

Hi, All...
My song "One More Time",is about to be put into music, by an English composer. And produced into a demo...SO I really need you to tell me what you think about this one.
Thanks.

Brian Eggertsen.

" One More Time "
© 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

V1:
I thought with time the pain would go away,
but it gets worse everyday,
left me with just, memories.
Memories that only love can hear,
flooded my heart with a million tears,
now I'm drowning from inside...

V2:
Every hour of everyday gets longer,
and my heart starts to hunger,
but I can't give, it the love.
The love that it misses oh so much,
wish I could reach out to feel your touch,
wish that I could hold you close...

C:
Just One More Time,
I wish I could feel your lips against mine.
Just One More Time,
I wish that I could have an endless night.
I wish I could have you...One More Time.

V3:
With every breath I take I can feel you,
but there's nothing I can do,
now I'm down, down, I'll never.
I'll never rise 'cause I'm in to deep,
I just wish I could hear you heart beat,
and see your beautiful eyes...

Repeat C: ( 2x )

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
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1 posted 2001-12-02 09:34 PM

so.. what kind of music is it? this sounds like it could fit well in a song easily!

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

2 posted 2001-12-02 10:39 PM

Thanks you for your read eaglescorpion...

The kinda thing we're amin' for is Pop/ballad, kinda like all the westlife themes. But in a different kinda way, if you know what I mean. It's a bit hard to desribe.
i know it will have at least 110-120 beats a minute...I'm not so much in to the Composing stuff, (yet) but I'm learnin'. Hope that answers you're question.
Thanks again...

Brian Eggertsen.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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3 posted 2001-12-03 06:46 AM

Umm I liked this not into Westlife much but the lyrics are cool, you think we could have an mp3 to hear the demo when it's done?

~The feelings are all replaced and the words are all decayed but its another day~ "My Vitriol"

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

4 posted 2001-12-03 08:41 AM

Thanks for your read Marshalzu...
You can most surtenly get an Mp3 to listen to when it's done, that's not problem..
Thanks again.

Brian Eggertsen.

Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
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5 posted 2001-12-03 10:25 AM

I think that is really good..If you ever put out a cd let me know..I would go out and buy it..

"Water Over Matter"

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

6 posted 2001-12-03 10:30 AM

Thank you for your read Lisa, I'll let you know if I put out a cd...
Thanks again.

Brian Eggertsen.

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