Teen Poetry #5 |
As You Walk Away |
Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I sit at home I hear the phone ring It's you You want to come over So of course I let you I am so happy to see you I hardly let you speak I was afraid of the words I was about to hear You say that it's over I can't believe it I tell you to get out As you walk away things don't look so good anymore You say you're sorry I am sorry to is all I can manage to say What more do you want You've ruined my life As I let you walk away... "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I liked that..If you have AIM IM me at LisaPigtails100 and I would like to talk to you..Great Poem! "Water Over Matter" |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Chel, This is something that I almost let happen to me, but I am struggling every day not to let it happen. Dawn |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's always hard to go thru this just stay strong and keep you chin up là où est mon amour? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It's a tough situation, indeed. Something that's hard for anyone to get over. But stay strong... *hug* Nice work, I enjoyed this one. And look forward to more. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
It's hard to go through what you have but sooner or later you will move on and things will get better.But I like this piece you express yourself well keep up the great work. Lauren |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is so sad...im so sorry that this happened hun...::hugs:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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