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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
A father, a lover, a friend, Why did it have to be the end? A wife, two daughters, and a son, Will never be able to show you what they’ve become. The cloud of pain is above, And with this gives our hearts a mighty shove. A man that was a friend to all, Why must this be the downfall? No more smiles, No more hugs, A truly great man now rests above. "Live to love or why live at all" |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Very powerful, I really enjoyed this one. Keep this up, until your next poem -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Extremely powerful Dean! I am Speachless!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
What a wonderful tribute to this man. He's lucky to have poeple like you living his memory on. Great write. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Yes, a beautiful tribute. I really liked the way you wrote the poem in couplet form. Couplets are good times  This is a well written poem, Dean. I really enjoyed it  I haven't seen you around Passions much, so I look forward to reading more from you soon, I hope. Nicely done here.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
wow this was awesome...if you wrote this from somebody i'm sure they're smiling at you right now :-) great work, this poem is really nice. thanks for sharing. -fear- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wonderful tribute ...VERY powerful...great job!im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's a sad thing that this person had to go, but it was his time and now he rests in a better place. A beautiful tribute this was.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really good trubute Keep his spirit alive in your memory thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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