Teen Poetry #5 |
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Realizeing |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
You say I can tell you anything, But do you really think I'm that stupid? Out of the people I know I thought I knew you best, And now I know I was wrong. Because you are such a fake person, Who fooled so many people but not me. You tried to turn friends against eachother, And then tried to play both sides but not anymore. I've been through a lot with you and it seems like it all meant nothing, But I don't care because we aren't friends anymore. So now I have a new mission to complete, Which is to tell everyone how you really are. Lauren |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Lauren, I just replied to Krystal, and told her she was in my head. Now after reading this poem by you, I am really starting to wonder what is gong on that two people besides myself have the exact same feelings as I have tonight. If you ever need to talk, please e mail me. Dawn |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
grrrrrrrrrr...this reminds me of some childish ppl i know...they belong back in primary ![]() nice write lauren...i can identify with it a lot. thanks for sharing this piece ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I hate people like the one you describe in your poem...i had a friend like that and i hate her soooo much!!! I comepletely got rid of her...she was deceiving for quite a while..always acted like she cared about what you said and wanted the best for you..but in reality she just twisted your words up and used them against you to make your life more miserable than it already is...to hell with those people!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
some people suck, and thats not cool. i know exactly where youre coming from with this. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This poems awesome you're awesome keep up the amazing work |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Trust is such a hard word... it's hard to not trust someone, but at the same time, hard to trust them. it seems to be setting one up for a disappointment either way, eh? Mean people suck... --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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