Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Wanna Shout |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
There’s something I must admit . . . When you hold me, I wanna shout, You give me a feeling, deep within, That makes me smile uncontrollably, I’m not sure what it is . . . But I think its that word . . . Love Everytyme you hold me, I wanna shout it out to the word, I think I’m falling in love with you I don’t want to jinx it, So I’m going to bite my tongue, And not let the words escape my lips But the truth of the matter is: . . . I’m falling in love with you! ![]() If I held a star everytyme |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Awww this was sooo sweet and happy!!! I know what you mean about sometimes having such wonderful strong feelings that you just wanna announce them to the world!! LOL, go ahead and shout if it makes u happier! ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Yoda Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19 |
Love is so beautiful. *sigh* You wrote about it in a way that was simple yet meaningful. Describing the stages of excited questioning... very good. ![]() ![]() You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Tamma --- just wanna know his name now ![]() Is this a new guy? you have so much "lovelife" in you good luck in this relationship thanks for sharing again nice to see you around là où est mon amour? |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I like this one..its pure and simple and very sweet. Good luck to you on this new "love" of yours!! ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ooooo Tamma. ![]() Nah good for you, hun. If a guy is making you this happy, it's all good. Remember to reply as well to others work. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hehe awwwww tamma you go girl! this was so cute! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
TELL HIM, THEN! Hehe.. very nice poem. Well-written, and enjoyed, as always. (: --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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