Teen Poetry #5 |
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Friends Forever |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
You told me you'd always be here Friends forever is what you said We were supposed to be together forever You got a bad disease You were to be here always Friends forever you'd say Together forever You got really sick Stayed in the hospital for a while You were to be here always We promised to always be together You broke that promise when you left to be with the Heavenly father I couldn't believe you left Friends forever you'd say Supposed to be together forever How could you leave me here alone I can't believe you're gone Friends forever you promised You weren't to be the first to go Lying on your death bed Singing church songs We were supposed to go together To be in a good place Friends forever You promised Together forever "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hey... you're still together. Not physically, but she's with you and you're with her. Good poem. Shows a side of loss that is difficult to put into words. You did it well. Thanks for sharing. Fearlessness isn't living without fear, fearlessness is being afraid and still living. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
It sounds like you're going through a very tough situation, one of the few that I can't really say I can relate to. But I do know that all losses are open wounds that will only heal with time. Remember that loved ones may leave in spirit, but a part of them will always remain within you. Hope things look brighter! ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Yoda Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19 |
I'm not going to lie... I don't relate to this at all. I've never lost anyone to death. However, I have lost people very close to me before so I do know, as you know, that it is one of the most painful things you can go through. I just hope that you, her friends, her family, and anyone that was lucky enough to meet what seems to be a wonderful person will find happiness and peace. Remember her for all the good times... for the beauty.. for the smiles... Remember love. I'm sure she'd want that. ![]() You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad but touching poem it had a really deep message which is also very sda.I hope and pray that somehow one day soon you will being to heal but it won't be easy because I'm going through it.If you ever need to talk I'll always be here and it's a very lovely poem. Lauren |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sad... I'm sorry you had to experience this loss. But if you were meant to be together to the end, then you'll be together again one day ![]() *hugs* Keep writing about it. It's the best remedy... --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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