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ForeverMyOwn Junior Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 13Brighton, MI |
Im still lost in my mind, and your all that i see. But i was never of your kind, and we could never really be. You control my mind, keep me still, but still deep down i know, we'll never be, no matter my will, and i've got to let it go. You'll always be to good for me, at least thats what your friends say. So i'll never set this thing free, and it wont stay caged another day. But here you are, deep in my blood, and still in my mind i know, though these emotions are a flood, that i've got to let it go. Evil, real evil, is the |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
its sad knowing that the best thing for a pair to do is move apart and let the friendship/relationship just slide. letting go is hard...and you summed up your emotions upon the matter really well. thanks for sharing this.  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Forever, I'm struggling with these very same issues tonight. I'm thinking it might be easier for a friend of mine if I just let the friendship and him go, but not sure if that is what is best for both of us. Dawn |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
It's hard knowing and realizing that the best thing for a relationship or friendship is to let it go.But after awhile the pain will go away and you will realize you did the right thing. Lauren |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its so hard to let things go in your mind if your heart still wants to hold strong...great poem..i really enjoyed it ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Sometimes being able to let go is the act that shows your true feelings for the person... as confusing as that may be. It's a tough situation, and it sounds like you're making the right decisions. Most people wouldn't be that mature about it. I really enjoyed this, it was well written, flowed nicely, and the rhyme scheme was well done. Job well done! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Grr to this. Relationships are such crap sometimes. Nice poem tho you've expressed yourself well. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautifully said...i admire your strength in knowing what should be keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sometimes its just better to let go then to stay with someone and get hurt in the long run. Me & my now ex boyfriend just broke up after 2 years and i never realized what it would be like without him. But i am having the time of my life the way it should have been even while i was with him. Im still lost in my mind, and your all that i see. i feel the same way!! Good luck with what it is that you decided to do about this. And keep up the good work!!! "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I thought that this was really sad...It sounds like your in a situation that really sucks, and I wish you the best in resolving it. Anyways, although I'm a firm believer of "never give up" sometimes letting things go and moving in makes life so much easier. Good luck!!  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The things we have to walk away from always hurt the most. I hope you'll be ok. Nice expression and well written. Thanks for sharing this. ~AF~ "When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West |
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