Teen Poetry #5 |
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love me for ....... |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV ![]() |
love me for i am punk. don't judge me because i am punk. judge me for who i am. i wear collars and studded bracelets. does any of that matter to you? i wear torn shorts and band shirts. does any of that matter to you? love me for i am robin. i am loud and gutsy! i am bold and darin. does any of this matter to you? love me for who i am. i am kind. i am loveable. i am caring. i am me! love me for i am.... a punk. i am robin. love me for me. and nothing else! when the day comes that you love me.i hope it will be just because you love me. nothing more. titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda* |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very interesting piece, but I liked it. You tell it like it is, and if they don't like it then whatever. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Robin, I like this piece a lot. I too just want people to love me for me, not because of something I wear, do, or have. Dawn |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
exactly i am me and that's all i can be! titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda* |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i guess no one else liked this poem ![]() titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda* |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know, i do like the poem a lot but it kind of contradicts itself. You say you want to be loved for being you, but must u be classified as "punk". What IS punk? If anything, and anything being love...the guy should love you for Robin being Robin, not Robin being punk. A poem well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I don't really care about the superficial stuff... ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwwwwww tks sea!! dopes i think you need to read it again!! but thanks yall are sweet to me!! titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda* |
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