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Teen Poetry #5

love is pure

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2001-11-18 09:25 PM

I can still smell your perfume,
that intoxicating flowery scent,
from when we were holding each other in your room.
It was then that I knew you were heaven-sent,
an angel to guide me from this hell
that has imprisoned my mind and soul.
Locked in this dreaded cell,
I yearn to be whole.

Yet, here I am, all
thoughts crowded,
emotions clouded.
and still I wait for your call.
Because for one moment
my mind is sure,
for that one precious moment
my love is pure.

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

1 posted 2001-11-18 09:29 PM

I really liked this poem
it really hit home with me
very well done

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-11-18 11:57 PM

I liked this a lot.

Dawn

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-11-19 01:49 PM

Wow...i really have to say i enjoyed this poem a lot..."for one single moment my love was pure"...amazing line!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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