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Clouded Soul |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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It was another slow,grey day in Oklahoma And the trees looked naked as they stood leafless against the faded backdrop of a clouded sky I watch as a single tear rolls down my cheek when I realize Im not looking out a window, but that I am peering into my soul The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle [This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
...magnificent!! I think I know exactly what you're trying to say... how one can grow to feel like a part of the living land.. how one sees the world is one's total existence, and hence, is one's soul.. well.. i cant even put a finger on it.. but this was beautiful |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This was very beautiful. Dawn |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Thank you both very much no one wquite understands me like passion's poets do  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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