Teen Poetry #5 |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i feel so sad and washed out when will these tears that come end looking for this thing we called happyness yet at the same time scared to find it knowing happiness also leads to pain not knowing how to trust people afraid that i'll get hurt |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i know this poem is short i know its not that good but i felt like writing bear with me =D |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
i beg to differ! i know exactly how you feel. this has a very good message. happiness is hard to find and sometimes it seems like you always get the short end of the stick. i i can totally relate to the "yet at the same time scared to find it knowing happiness also leads to pain not knowing how to trust people afraid that i'll get hurt" then again you can't avoid searching for happiness just becuase you are afraid of getting hurt. anyhoo, i'm not quite sure how much of this you understand but i just hope you do. good write. ab "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
aww *hugs* length doesnt matter hun, its the content. and ur content is packed full of emotions. i hope all is goin great for u scarlet. i know i havent talked to ya in forevers and im sorry for that. i miss you and hope everything is ok. *hugs* tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I toltally can relate to what your feeling and I hope things get better for you soon.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
hmm trying to find some of my old poems so yeah.... as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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