Teen Poetry #5 |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC ![]() |
Do you ever think of me Or smell the scent of my perfume Then feel a smile come to your lips While it lingers in the room? Do you ever miss me And wish that I was there Making wonderful love all night Out in the nighttime air? Do you ever look up at the stars Wondering if I'm looking at them, too Then make a wish upon one of them That I was there with you? Do you ever cry with sadness 'Cuz I left this earth too soon Do I bring you wonderful memories As you stare up at the moon? Do you ever feel cheated For not doing all we planned to do And did I make you happy enough During the little time I had with you? Just know I am always with you Don't ever forget that- please! And that it's my lips kissing you Every time you feel a gentle breeze. *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
oooooh, nice poem, i like it ![]() This was very good, most excellent. Me thinks that if i were the guy, i'z would be thinking those things ![]() Great write! -Dreys "My ducks name is Vernan" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my girlie, this is touching....I love it! I think this is one of my favs of yours ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"And that it's my lips kissing you Every time you feel a gentle breeze." ![]() i liked this one very much...your writings are beautiful. =) |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
OOOOOooooH! the first stanza captured SO much! i loved the poem TRUCK LOADS A....i love the way you fill your poetry with sweet as sweet sentiments. good job girly ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey, I think that this one is my favorite of yours, you've done an extraordinary job!!! Very nice work here!!! ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow, Andrea... Ur poems always amaze me. I really liked this one... Wow. Great job, one of my favorites from you. Awesome write. - Cody - |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
HEY! i love the poem, as always..check ur email! thanks alot... I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
thats really beautiful....i like it alot. i can relate to it. and im really impressed with the last stanze, it was my favorite part of the poem! ![]() Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a great poem. I too have to say it is probably the best I've read from you. I especially loved the last stanza. Dawn |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I enjoyed this one lots! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i'm not sure if i have ever read any of your poems but this one sure caught my eyes look forward to reading more of your work from me as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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