Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Got a Vision |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
I looked around, everything seemed so big. I looked around and saw a vision. In the vision, I heard a voice. “Don’t be afraid, I’ll lead the way.” I followed the voice to a small cafe. It seemed to be old and small, But warm and nice. On the table, I saw a cup of hot tea. I picked it up and had a sip. Sitting on the soft sofa on the side, I fell into deep sleep. When I woke up, I didn’t know what the time anymore. I looked up, and saw a person sit beside me. He said, “Don’t be afraid, I’ll lead you home.” He held my hand and walked out the cafe. We came to a park where a house nearby, “This is your new home, please feel welcome.” I opened the door and see a face familiar, “You are...” I woke up and saw myself in my bed. What a sweet dream- I’m dreaming of you tonight. Lizzy Vivian http://members.shaw.ca/home0/ ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is my first post in teen poetry. please give me some feedback. ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This one reminded me of my fave coffee commercial! Great write! I look forward to more! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
that post had a gentle feeling to it i guess sweet dreams do that but you wrote it enough for the reader to feel the same great write thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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