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My other half
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My other half |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
My other half A ray of light A smile slowly forms on my face Happy i have found you Knowing from when i first met you We were destined to be friends I knew i had found someone special A friend who i would hold in my memorys for life No matter what happened Friends like you are hard to find Ruled over by the darkness and sorrow I seemed to push you away My fears became reality Knowing i have to make things right You slowly walk away The more i try Only makes the distance further Trying to sort out my pain Find a way to be a better friend Slowly making another connection A ray of light A smile on my lips Happy i have found you My other half Best friend I am trying to start writing some stuff that has some what of a happy note hope you guyz like this one! as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a very good poem. I liked how you ended this one. It summed it all up very nicely. Good job Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I think that is really cool..Great work! |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This makes me think about soul mates. I definitely believe that there is someone out there for each person that they are meant to be with forever. Their "other half" (as you put it) can come in the form of a friend or a boyfriend/girlfriend. But either way, I have faith that destiny will lead you to this person. Good luck!   ~*Nikki*~~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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