Teen Poetry #5 |
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To the wizard of oz |
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sinfully_seductive Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 31 |
If only I hadn't a brain then I wouldn't have to think wouldn't have to think of all this crap I'm surrounded by wouldn't have to think of all the ways my life could turn If only I hadn't a heart then I wouldn't have to feel wouldn't have to feel this unjust pain from which I suffer wouldn't have to feel her presence within my hellish prison If only I hadn't courage then I wouldn't hae to face wouldn't have to face the ignorance and complexity of this society wouldn't have to face my sole bein of who I am BUT... I do have a brain a brain that analyzes everything I need for it to I do have a heart a heart that emotionalyzes every aspect of life I need for it to And I do have courage courage that lets me live my life without ropes to tie me down like I need the most same-sex couples are like kama sutra - beautiful but misunderstood! |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This poem was pretty good. I liked the idea behind it. And relating it to Wizard of Oz was pretty cool too. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
its not to long but you can tell what your talking about and i alwayz have thought it was cool when you show one side to the other its like even though life can be the pits you have the power to go on sort of uplifting as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I love that...I am a fan of the wizard of oz..Its really cool..I just started poetry..I have a hole note book full..I just now gotta type them.. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey, I love how you used the Wizard of Oz in this. "If I only had a heart" Ha! If only they knew! Great write, I really enjoyed this! ![]() ![]() ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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