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chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

0 posted 2002-06-21 02:48 PM

He watched the clouds of silver spirals dancing in the air
And wondered how his starlight lover, how his starlight lover faired.
And lying still, upon the ground, his palms upturned, Despair
Prayed she might return to him, and lay her kisses there.

And in the night, he watched the moon, reflected in his eyes
Yet kept his gaze on starlit love, on starlit loving skies.
And light that flickered like the stars in streams of fireflies
Kept his shadow hidden well, his heart in hate's disguise.

And though the rose forever bloomed, forgotten in his dreams
His tears were washed away by rain, away by rainy streams
That broke the skies in ever blue, of wispy, flowing seams
To let the light of love flow through, in warm and golden beams.

He watched the skies of azure hues, and breathing in the air
He wondered how his starlight lover, how his starlight lover faired.
And lying still, upon the ground, and eyes upturned, his prayer
Sent her love from deep within...

In turn, his soul was spared.

* * * * *
EEGADS! The muse is getting worse. And it's still rusty. ^_^ Oh well...*evil grin* Next time...

Leah

Faerie Lick
New Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 9
Curious, so curious

1 posted 2002-06-21 03:21 PM

From the first line to the last it was very interesting and enjoyable. I don't think you have to worry about your muse.

Hey, look at me.

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

2 posted 2002-06-21 05:27 PM

It's good to come back to good things...Like ALL of your writing. Yep been away for a while but I'll be around. I don't think you need to worry about your muse, he, she, it is still working wonderfully. Again this was nice. Had a nice sense of drama to it, if that makes any sense. Later.

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

Neosaphire
Junior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 20
Oklahoma City

3 posted 2002-06-22 12:02 PM

mmm...so pretty...thank you.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-06-22 03:00 AM

Wow---Leah...you're not rusty!!! If anything...your "poetic break" has made you better 100 FOLD!!! I'm serious!!! I LOVED the beginning...my God---you never cease to amaze me!

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

5 posted 2002-06-25 08:44 PM

*sigh* why cant i have a starlight lover like that.. wait. dont tell 'rew leah *ahem* beautiful words leah, beautiful. so romantic and wishful. very peaceful too.. made me just want to m-e-l-t. *swoon* it just flo~wed off the tongue as I read it. great job love. *peck*
btw, im gonna kick you next time you post without letting me know *glare* i almost missed this.

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

6 posted 2002-06-26 03:45 AM

oh this is beautiful....

you know what though le-uh dear? you should really stop saying that your muse has gone rusty..it seems as though its only served to go from strength to strength....you're an swesome writer....

keep postin!

ps~ i LOVED the form..original and ingenious the way you stuck to it throughout.

could the darkness be my friend?

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