Teen Poetry #5 |
I will love you forever |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I'll come runnin' when you call I will catch you when you fall these arms won't let your heart break. when you hurt I will be there And your burdens I will baer oh no matter what it takes... I will love you forever, for the rest of my life... This you have to understand Girl your wish is my command anything you say I'll do I'd walk half way 'round the world because your love is a pearl every word I say is true... I will love you forever, for the rest of my life... I'll come runnin' when you call I will catch you when you fall these arms won't let your heart break I will love you forever, for the rest of my life... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This sounds like a song i know...the poem was great though..keep writing. Regina |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
this really does sound like a song, not one that i have heard but it sounds like it would make a good one. i like it though. and it's always nice to care for someone as much as you do. good write. ab "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This person is very lucky to have someone like you in their life..your a true friend...they are very hard to find ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
wow that poem is really sweet whoever you wrote that for is lucky from me |
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Jimmy_Fallon New Member
since 2001-11-16
Posts 3Selah , Washington |
Wow... you my friend are one of a kind its nearly impossible to find guys like you and this girl of yours must be extremely lucky keep up the work and good luck : ) "...but what I hate the most is that I don't hate you... not even a little bit... not even at all" |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem I loved it. Lauren |
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