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Return of a Friend
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Return of a Friend |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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Return of a friend Like a flame, blown out by the wind You stormed out of my life So quickly, I didn’t realize what was going on The crushing blow went straight to my heart I didn’t know how to cope with this I was so young and juvenile I sat up wishing every night Wishing you would come back, so we could be friends again Day by day, that dream faded as I realized what you had become I hated you for what you said For what you did But down inside I still had a certain love for you You were my shelter, my comfort, for so long How could I forget that? How could I abandon all that the way you did? But now, now you have come back Expecting my forgiveness But I hesitate I fear for what I don’t know And I fear that you have changed But you are still the same crazy girl I met so long ago The one I missed over this unbearable time But you created a void that could never be filled again I will still be weary of you creeping behind me Of you trying to tear me away from my one true love The one I can’t have Of you trying to separate me from my true friends Of you dragging me down But no matter how much I worry Just know, you will always have a special place in my heart *Nous aimons et nous vivons* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's so good to see you back here again  I'm glad you decided to visit us It's been a long time Priscilla I see you are having problems with an old friend I hope you solve your differences welcome back  là où est mon amour? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Very heartfelt and well done! I'm sorry things are confusing for you! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Beautiful poem it's very heartfelt I love it you have a specialt talent keep up the great work. Lauren |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
It sounded as if you were speaking to a lost parent. Father who walked out perhaps. Or maybe just a friend... I dunno. I do know that I I liked this a lot...WELCOME BACK!!! Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Nice to see ya here again!! i enjoyed this poem...i understand what your going through...nice job and keep on posting! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
i like this alot !!!! i call my boyfriend sweetstuff...lol anyways i love this piece 3 out of 5 computers bought today will be physically abused by their owners... |
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