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krystlebabe19 Junior Member
since 2001-11-09
Posts 27 |
I WISH I could tell him I, like him I wish I could tell him I, care I wish for just one second of, his time I'd do anything to be the one, on his mind God, I would be so proud to stand by his side, my head held high Just me and him thats all it would be To bad he'll never notice me By:Krystle |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was beautiful! I have soooo totally been there lol, and still am! ~*~Priscilla~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! First of all, it's nice to see you join us here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you enjoy reading other poets' work and sharing your own as well. If you have any questions regarding PIP, don't hesitate to contact one of the forum mods, and that includes me. welcome and enjoy Secondly.....Why don't you tell this person how you feel. I know it's hard, but it never hurts to try. Better than being in the dark, right? Good luck  Thanks for sharing ps. pls check your email for a special greeting là où est mon amour? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Great poem! I can relate very well to what you wrote about... Thanks for sharing! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
bump  là où est mon amour? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know, this poem was very very simply written, but it's probably one of the most heart felt poems i've read in a while. I don't know. I just really felt this one hard. I really liked it and would like to welcome you to passions.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
simple, i have felt similar, briliant..... uh... great! That was a very nice first post! Welcome to PIP! Im sure you'll like it here. If you feel like talking, feel free to e-mail me or icq me. -Dreys |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
great first post and i know exactly how you feel. sometimes it stinks more for a guy not to notice you than for him to notice you but just not be interested. (if that made any sence at all) anyhoo, i look forward to reading more of your works. take care ab |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Welcome Krystle!! I've already read a poem from you and i enjoyed it a lot and i look forward to reading more from you in the near future! I hope that one day you'll get ur WISH and you'll be with him Welcome again!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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