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Teen Poetry #5

Laugh

apsara
Member

since 2000-11-09

Posts 70

0 posted 2001-11-10 05:29 AM

Laugh behind my back
Laugh loudest, laugh hardest
Laugh all day, laugh til your sides ache
Laugh, laugh, just laugh

Laugh at me, laugh for me
Laugh at what i do
Laught maniacally, full of glee
Laugh again and again and again

All you do is laugh
I'd bang my head and you're still laughing
There you go again, laughing never with me
But laughing, just laughing at me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-10 11:50 AM

hey, you must know my family....
I know how this feels, really.
this packs a punch for me. great writing.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-11-13 08:51 PM

Great job! If it makes you feel any better, the entire world laughs at me, I just laugh at myself along with them! Thanks for sharing this one!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-11-13 09:20 PM

If someone is laughing at you it's just showing they are insecure with themselves so don't let it get to you.But I really like your style in this piece.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-14 09:58 AM

This poem was really good...it was a harsh outlook on how cruel people can be...i enjoyed this a lot and i think you expressed yourself nicely here

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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