Teen Poetry #5 |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
The tears of joy, love, and mirth All shared upon the birth Of revealing a soul. To sit and hear your goal To reach out and touch the stars And have the soul reply: Upon the wings of a dragon fly. Now your sure this soul Is sharing your dreams and goals your two threads are now woven together The feathery secrets Between you two now murmured How excitedly you two whispered Of this newfound relationship Buried under heavy ground Suddenly your eyes open wide So relieved you could have cried The soul i found was yours, Refreshed and found anew After all those years, Locked behind closed doors. Returning to you, The hope and bliss you once knew to my friend Jenn I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is beautiful. Jenn will love it, I am sure. |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I like this better than your other one, it was written more skillfully. I, too, hope your friend Jenn appreciates it. Theo |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
oh my goodness! ure back!! ure ancient like me lol i haven't talked to you for like 500 years. i dunno if you even remember me. always always loved your poetry, and im so glad youre back. wonderful post ![]() ![]() *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome back Jeremiah. ![]() Your friend Jenn eh? Well I dare not assume it's me since my name is common...but would you mind explaining the poem's meaning to me anyway? Nice to see you back here. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This is so raw and beautiful, I loved it! Great work! ![]() ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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