Teen Poetry #5 |
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Is it something more? |
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just_me Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 19 |
Little did I know that a month ago We wouldnt be this close of friends But a lot has changed in the past month To make me see That there will be no end We share our thoughts our dreams, our hopes wanting to make each our own A stare, a look call it what you want even in your voice when we're on the phone A little hello a wink or a smile everything about you makes me jump with joy As everyone says I now have a glow just like a kid opening a new toy All of this because of one little thing something so small and out of the blue that makes me feel so big and so free and all of this just because of you |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Nice poem. Good work on it. I'm happy for you, that you have found what you have. Theo |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Just me, This is a very beautiful poem. It's so nice when the unexpected happens, esp when that unexpected is making a friend. This is a great poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. Dawn |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aw! That's so cute and sweet! Well done on this one! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
twins im tellin ya~goin through this with my bestfriend. Except I'm just not sure I can let myself let go with him. ya know?? but im glad everything is working out for you ![]() ![]() *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
i think it's awesome that you are writing your emotions out, and that you have so much "constructive" stuff to say :-P but seriously though, this poem was good. and no matter how much of a baby i was during your "glowing" phase, or how negative i may have seemed toward you, ya gotta believe me, i was soooooo happy for you. i live to see you smile :-) keep up the good writing. -adamma *The heart is a house for love* |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
i think it's awesome that you are writing your emotions out, and that you have so much "constructive" stuff to say :-P but seriously though, this poem was good. and no matter how much of a baby i was during your "glowing" phase, or how negative i may have seemed toward you, ya gotta believe me, i was soooooo happy for you. i live to see you smile :-) keep up the good writing. -adamma *The heart is a house for love* |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great poem!! This person sounds great ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Lovely. ![]() I hope you hold onto this person for a very long time. Keep smiling! ![]() ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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