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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-11-05 03:23 PM

resurrect the past let the future stand strong
in a place where I no know I belong
is it time for me to carry on
or is it time for me to say I'm gone
my past now present right in my face
I'm sorry, but I need grace
I can't make it on my own
I just want to go home

well I don't know what's going on
and I don't know when I'm done
well I don't know what's going on
but I know this is no fun

time and again I see you standing there
time and again I wonder why you care
my body trembles at your sight
my eyes blinded by the gleaming light
I don't to say or to do
but I know my heart longs for you
my inner being aches in pain
please tell me I'm not insane

well I don't know what's going on
and I don't know when I'm done
well I don't what's going on
but I this is no fun

seperation from you is so dim
I search and seek and all I see is him
I'm wondring why it hurts so very bad
why this feeling just drives me mad
no I don't know
no I don't know
no I don't know
WHY

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-11-05 05:46 PM

I like this song, it's a very songy song. Congratulations on a songy song if that's what you were going for.
I could almost imagine the music that would go along with it, in fact.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-11-05 06:06 PM

i believe this is a first song of yours i actually read...think you did a wonderful job.

=)

just_me
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since 2001-10-24

Posts 19

3 posted 2001-11-05 07:10 PM

I like... you really caputred what you were trying to say... It hit a spot with me keep it up!

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

4 posted 2001-11-05 07:24 PM

cool stuff thanx

Greeneyes7
Junior Member

since 2001-11-05

Posts 16
Illinois

5 posted 2001-11-05 07:38 PM

I like it. The song sounds good to me. Full of feeling. That's always nice to read. I hope things get better for you.

Life is what you make it. Live each day as if it was your last.

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

6 posted 2001-11-06 12:09 PM

Nice song.

Dawn

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

7 posted 2001-11-06 02:13 PM

Nice song, sucky feeling. It's all too familiar. Good job.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

8 posted 2001-11-07 04:28 AM

great song jimmy! i liked it.

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vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

9 posted 2001-11-07 07:36 AM

I like the way you wrote this. I wish I could hear the music and the rythym going along with the lyrics..Nice job!

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

10 posted 2001-12-07 08:38 AM

Very cool song. I do like what it portrays. Make sure you keep writing these. You obviously have a knack for them.

~AF~

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