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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Don't come to me I'm not willing to listen to your crap I'm just not wanting to be resiponsible anymore I need to get away yes, I'm a coward are you going to stone me? I'm waiting. DO you think your words hurt me? god yes I have only 3 things in my life that are true my art my writing There is no more pity, forgivness get out of my way I don't have time for you, for anyone I need to go someplace far away not with any of you don't count on me because i can count on you never could everything is in front of your face I have no patience for your crap same as you have no paitence for mine you have never done anything to help me just lectured your the kind of peopless i wanted as friends. I bug you so leave it be you truley act like i never existed. but thats ok because they were right all I really had to do was never open myself up i just need to shrivel away without the light of hope or happiness. Regina The next poems of mine will all be part of "Valley of Fears" which will be a series of poems about lots of things in life. till the next time. If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Regi. Lots of pain portrayed in this poem.. lots of negativity. I enjoyed this. I'm looking forward to reading the next in the series. Thanks for sharing this with us. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
wow regina. this is great. i cant wait to read the rest of this series. lots of emotion here. i love it. its going into my library. great job here. u told this well. *hugs* hope all is well. tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Regina, I really enjoyed the read and I can't wait for the next one in the series...  Zu |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
good stuff ina liked it looking foward to the rest of the valley poems. I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
what can I say? It's wonderful! I really liked it and surely I look forward to the rest of the Valley Of Fears poems. Thanks for sharing! |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Ok, maybe it is just me, but what was the third thing ture in you life? It was a great poem, and I look forward to seeing more of this series! *Amanda* |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
nice job here! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
sorry I was writing true love brad. but i kinda skipped thoughts. thanks for everyones replies, means alot. If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you expressed this very well...i enjoyed the poem ...great job on writing this...as i wait for the enxt.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here Regi....I know you're going through some nasty times right now. I really hope you're ok.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Great poem I enjoyed it greatly. I have read a few of your poems now and I like what I am seeing. Well until "Velley of Fears #2" Keep writing! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey Ina, this poem is troubling You sure you are okay? I'm here to talk to you know Sorry, if I haven't been available lately I've just been very busy with work Talk to me okay? hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*gives you a standing ovation* You are one my favourite writers in here, Regi. You tell everything like it is and truly express your thoughts and emotions. This piece rocked as per usual. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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