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love's tortured fate
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love's tortured fate |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
you never knew me well at all, you weren't there to see me fall. 'cuz you can't see all the pain I hold inside, now I know why i wanna run and hide. TORTURED.... you didn't see my feelings for you, you didn't know what to do. When you seen me cryin', did you feel like dyin? MISERY...... I saw through you, saw you were fake, now you haunt my dreams, but i can't stay awake. i can't hide all these tears, I'll have to wait 'til these feelings are cleared. BURNED.... I tried, I really tried, but our love had finally died. FATE....... ~when i look, ur never there, but when i close my eyes, ur everywhere...2 me....~Michelle Branch |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
WOW-- so powerful it gives me chills, i am speechless... great write! *Pixie* |
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Poetof-the-night Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 13 |
Very good, I think it was a great piece of work... "Don't think you can know you can" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I am really loving this!! Great work here!  WOWJenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks all...dont know wut else 2 say but thanks  ugh, my life is like a soap opera, everyday something new comes along and makes it 10x worse |
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