Teen Poetry #5 |
![]() ![]() |
the final chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz ![]() |
I Motionless breeze whips through, tears apart, inside what was not a very wholesome love for me. II Standing. Deafening silence, gripping the railing, break the glass with my heartbeat. Doesn’t stop soon enough. III Mortal fascination stole me. I can hear the sirens already. IV I gave plenty of clues. you never woke up to realise that this is all your fault. V My grip loosens. I fly. Too late. So Sorry. --- pure expression. this is not foreshadowing in any way whatsoever. --- - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
||
© Copyright 2001 jennifer elizabeth - All Rights Reserved | |||
cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awesome poetry jen, it may not be foreshadowing for you but i can certainly relate to it. you cant wait around for that one person forever. hearts do grow distant as time passes... f t e |
||
Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. Awesome emotions. I liked this. ![]() "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
||
Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I like it a lot! Charisma |
||
Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Once again! Your poetry rocks!! Keep it up! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
||
Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
Oh, my goodness! That was... wow! I mean, really...~*~WOW~*~!!!! Great write, I loved it! |
||
xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Really good!! Full of emotions...wonderful job ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
||
LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
I liked this a lot, good job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |