Teen Poetry #5 |
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Disappointment |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Here's an old Favorite of mine. I have posted it somewhere on Piptalk before but that was so long ago I don't think anyone will care if I do so again. Disappointment I live my life for disappointment feeling trapped on my endless circle forever wishing once; broken Thy pattern be deeper and darker each new shining moment becomes, when only held each morning my heart up to the rising sun to watch it set on me. Later. Ex Animo, [email protected] |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
Welcome to pip. I'm Raven. I actually like this. heh ![]() *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhhh I do feel this one. Nice job. You say you've been to PIP before? Was your name diff? Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh yes I know how this is. But there is nothing quite like disappointment ![]() thanks for the read. ![]() ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Ya about a year ago ( I think ) I posted a few poems around on various boards under the name AWood0813. Actually not too many on this board though. And I wasn't around much so that's why you don't recoginze the name. Ex Animo, [email protected] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very thought provoking hope things do brighten up for you thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Your words were strong and u really expressed yourself well..i can see why this is one of your favorites. Nice job and keep em comin! |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
argue..i love to argue {i was readin ur critique message..} but there aint nothin to argue about here! i think ive read this befor enot sure but i found it again so yuh know.. Very nice! "If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus |
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