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Regrets of My Own |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
her insults are so cruel they hit me like a slap hard across my round pudgy face tears fall and dreams die I sit and drown in pain her words eating me inside out she shows no mercy no remorse or regret she never physically hurts me but her words, those damn words truly give me an unbearable mental and emotional beating the look in her eyes that determined and fierceful look is her only look of regret regret that she ever had me that determined look to get rid of me to chase away reminders of a wasted childhood and painful adolescent years She regrets her whole life but stresses how much she regrets mine just hammering what a mistake I was in my head Yet she shows interest in why I behave the way I do like she's really concerned about my weird behavior she has no clue as to why I am the way I am and I don't have the guts to tell her |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Wow, this is a very emotional poem. It's really good. Very powerful. I hope you can resolve things soon with this person. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow...I know someone who, with a little modification, would fit this poem perfectly. Wow...Yo're not Becky by any chance are you? But anyway, it's a very good poem, keep posting, and you don't ave to justify why you are the way you are, unless those causes aren't worthy. No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Man Trina...Such a horrible situation you described. I'm sorry. No one deserves to be treated and made to feel like that. Stay strong sweetie. You wrote an awesome poem. The emotions were so intense. I loved this. GREAT JOB! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
...this hit home...i can totally relate to what you were saying...great job!...enjoyed greatly...full of powerful emotions. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a heart wrenching poem. Sounds like yer either talking about a person you know or your mother, but I got the feeling you were talking about yer mom. Anyhow, I hope things get better and just stay strong. You wrote a very sad poem. It hit me hard.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
this was so sad and so emotional...im so sorry hun...you expressed your feelings wonderfully tho |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*hugs* Very emotional poem... The pain you portrayed really hit hard. I hope this isn't someone in your family. Words can hurt so much more than any physical pain. I'm so sorry you have to endure this, and I hope things get better. Very nice poem. All the emotions really make this one shine. Nice work. If you ever need to talk to someone, never hesitate to email me  Keep posting your work, and sharing it with us.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Thank you everyone for your comments, I'm glad to know I'm not alone and that people can relate to what im saying but im also sorry for those who can relate because I know how bad it feels. Thank you again |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very very emotional poem. You've expressed yourself really well. I do hope that you both can iron thing out. hope to see more of your work in the future, keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Thanx I hope so too. I will share some more of my work very soon. Hope everyone likes Take care, Trina |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I am so sorry you are having to deal with this. It is not fair for anyone to suffer this kind of emotional beating. *hugz* Great poem, and I look forward to more. *Amanda* |
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Empty tears Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 64 |
This brought tears to my eyes,im so sorry you are going through this. keep writing,it helps. ~Brittany~ Death is but an escape from loneliness |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Yea writing seems to be the only thing at the moment I'm really good at and it makes me feel better once I've gotten my feelings out on paper. Thank you for your comments Take care, Trina |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a very emotional poem which contained lots of feelings, I enjoyed it very much and hope to read some more of your poems soon! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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