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Teen Poetry #5

stale poptarts

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2001-10-17 10:33 PM

Stale poptarts
between
the aching
teeth
fill the void
you left behind.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-10-17 11:11 PM

It took me a while to get the message, but I think I've got it by jove. With that being said, I believe it illustrates the point beautifully. Sweet and succint.
Nicely done.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

2 posted 2001-10-17 11:15 PM

not sure what i make of the poem, doesn't matter

you said POPTART!!!!!! YAY FOR POPTARTS!!!!!!

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

3 posted 2001-10-17 11:34 PM

not sure what i make of the poem, doesn't matter

you said POPTART!!!!!! YAY FOR POPTARTS!!!!!!

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-18 10:00 AM

mmm poptarts..i love poptarts..that reminds me im hungry...lol oyy gettin off track here...i got ur message hun but did ya really have to go and make me hungry!?! lol

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

5 posted 2001-10-18 12:57 PM

stale poptarts make you hungry?

ew.

yeesh.

i was trying to make them sound bad, oh well, they sound gross to me.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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